大家先跟随王老师对比以下两个书写类作文的开头：
①Dear Mary,
How are you? I watched a horse riding competition yesterday evening.I watched this competition with my friend.I like horse riding because it’s very exciting.
②Hi Mary,
I watched a horse riding competition.I watched this competition with my friend.It made me happy.
大家看完这两个开头的第一感觉，应该都是①的开头给人的感觉更加亲切。
在书信类作文开头中，亲切的称呼是书信作文的良好开端，我们可以使用my dear…或dear…这类词语来开头。
另外，在①中，作者第一句话便写出了问候语How are you，相对于②开头直入主题来说，①的开头更加适用于书信类作文，也减少了阅读时的生硬感和距离感。
大家在写此类文章开头时，也可以引用诸如此类的问候语。比如：
Thank you for your letter.
Nice to hear from you.
How is it going?
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接下来王老师为大家提供一篇优秀作文供大家参考，建议先自己练习下再参考范文哦！
范文
Hi Sandy,
How are you? I am excited to stay with you for a week, also! I’m sure we will have a lot of fun together.
On the first night, I would rather stay at home and relax because I will be tired after such a long trip to your house.
Thank you for the offering to go climbing, but I would not like to go climbing in the mountains because it seems dangerous. I want us to be safe!
I do have one question. Would it be possible to go to the beach one day while I’m there?
I am looking forward to seeing you.
Your friend,
Christine
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